Many communities are not prepared when disaster strikes. Houses are destroyed, communication lines are cut, quantity of food and water is very little etc. Disasters happen fast. To help people start the recovery process; the local government has the flexibility and resources to provide help immediately. However, since long-term recovery requires assistance beyond the budget of any particular state or municipality— the federal government should have the responsibility of ultimately getting people and businesses functioning again.
The first response to a disaster should be the job of the local or state government, with the help of volunteer agencies. They will need to supply electrical power, food, water, shelter and other basic human needs. However, the long-term recovery phase should be taken care of by the federal government if the municipal and/or state government are unable to financially support their people and/or the governor requests for a major disaster declaration but he must also execute state funds and resources for reconstruction efforts. Had a major disaster occurred such as a hurricane or flood, and the happening was clearly more that the state/local government can handle, the federal government should intervene and put their funds to good use such as helping disaster victims, businesses, and private units.
A disaster is the tragedy of a natural or human-made hazard that negatively affects society or environment. When a disaster strikes, it strikes fast and many times unexpectedly. Many people do not have the time or money to prepare for these tragedies; so who must help them in their time of need? My response is that everyone must take a part in the reconstruction process, whether it’s from the donation of money, food and water, or supplies. Helping people in need helps form one body of society instead of many dismembered parts.
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